Alastair’s Photo Fiction is a weekly challenge to produce flash fiction from a photo prompt. The word limit is 150 words but actually it isn’t a strict limit. Alastair claims the Word Police will not arrest anyone for “dangerous prolixity,” but to be on the safe side I’ve limited myself to merely pushing the envelope. Alastair supplies the images and the rest of us have the fun of writing a story about it. Anyone is invited to join. My story begins after the image. The challenge may be found here: http://alastairsphotofiction.wordpress.com/2013/05/19/photo-fiction-sunday-19th-may-2013/
Genre: Horror
Word Count: 150
Mortimer sighed. “Another useless heirloom, Kenrick?”
“Not at all, sir,” said Kenrick, setting the box before Mortimer.
Mortimer ignored the decorative knotwork. Callously, he threw open the box and withdrew a blackened and wrinkled hand. “What good is this to this bankrupt estate, Kendrick?” He gestured with the hand. “This estate, that should have made me money, hmm?”
“It is the preserved hand of a Celtic sorcerer, sir. The previous Lord Hinton used it successfully but…”
“Used it how?” Interrupted Mortimer. “Did he just think ‘money’ and it appeared out of…?” Mortimer stopped when he noticed the pile of gold coins before him.”
“It works rather well, sir,” said Kenrick. “But there is a cost.”
Mortimer ignored him, shouting “Money!” and creating piles of gold around the room.
One hour later, the sorcerer’s hand lay upon a pile of bones, surrounded by gold coins.
“Nothing left but to retire,” sighed Kenrick.
Haha .. There is always a cost and the greedy ones never listen 😀 I love this
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If he had only read any P.G. Wodehouse, he would know that idiots should listen to their butlers. *sigh* Some never learn.
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I’ve never read Wodehouse. May have to look it up
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Yeah. Find the Wooster and Jeeves stories. They’re quite hilarious.
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Ahh now I know them. Not sure which country you are in, we had a series over here with Laurie (House) and Fry (V for Vendetta) called Jeeves and Wooster 🙂
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Yeah, I think I caught an episode or two on Public Television (good programming isn’t necessarily available on regular TV) here in the US. I watch British TV as often as I can get my hands on it. Have you heard of the show MI-5? I just love that one.
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I haven’t. I’ll have to dig it up and see what’s it like 🙂
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A nice twisted variation of the Midas touch 🙂
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Yup. There would’ve been a Dorian Grey aspect too, but I didn’t have enough words and Mortimer wasn’t interested in hearing the instructions. “When all else fails, read the bloody manual.”
Thanks much for the visit!
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He is like greedy Midas..nicely done
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Indeed, and too arrogant to listen to the wizened butler who’s information could have spared him his life. *oops*
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It’s interesting to think about what would be worth paying the price for. Obviously not until death, but what would you literally give your left arm for?
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That’s the problem with Mortimer. He didn’t stop to ask the price for what he got. The price is that he aged, but he did so much in so little time, by the time the effects kicked in, he was nothing but bones. Magic usually comes with a cost.
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A nice little turn; very well done. And here I thought the box contained tea.
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Thanks Bill. Coming from you, that means a lot.
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Excellent tale, very well told.
Most enjoyable.
And a moral, to boot!
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Thank you most kindly. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Great short! The old cliche “The butler did it” was nicely skirted. Most satisfactory little read, bravo.
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Thank you. The butler did indeed avoid that one, but I suspect he slipped out in the middle of the night with a lot of gold in his pockets. How do you explain how the master died? Right, better to just leave.
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Let sleeping dogs lie I say…
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And thus, you’ll probably live longer than Mortimer. Thanks much for the visit.
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My pleasure.
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Distructions… that’s what we call ’em. Last resorte. After all wouldn’t want the guys in our house to have their ‘Man Cards’ revoked. Instructions, directions… must be a guy thing 🙂
I was thinking that some of the coins…had teeth…like like those nasty little fish. Me thinks the butler knew just what he was doing…and left without a single coin, or the hand. And even if he wasn’t shouting with glee, being a good restraint English butler – his brain was screaming ‘I’m free’.
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Exactly. You could lose your ‘man card’ easily if insisting on instructions. That’s why married men live longer. Women are always demanding the instructions be read. 😉
Mortimer “was” shouting with glee on the inside, but there were no teeth on these coins. He lived quite an easy life afterwards. Did he know what he was doing? Hmm. I’ll leave that up to your imagination.
Thanks much for stopping to comment!
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Great read! Love your take on greed!
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Thank you very much!
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