Written for Alastair’s Photo Fiction. Story begins after the image.
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Word Count: 199
Dreams To Be
” ‘ere now. There’s a line!” Protested a man waiting in line for ice cream.
“I’m on maneuvers,” said Lieutenant Cosset, cutting in at the front of the line.
“Wot? On Sunday? In the bloody middle of London?”
Cosset ignored the man and the murmurs of others waiting. He addressed the ice cream vendor. “I understand you have the best ice cream in London. What’s so great about it?”
“It is magic ice cream,” replied the vendor. An ancient man, heavily wrinkled with twinkling eyes. “You become what you dreamed of when you were a child.”
“Magic? Yes that’s nice for the kids. I’ll have a…”
The vendor smiled and handed him a Daquiri Ice in a sugarcone. Cosset’s favorite. Stunned, he paid wordlessly and sat down. Soon he was lost in thought, sitting in the sun with his ice cream.
When he finished, he found himself cutting in line again. He paid for the ice cream of all waiting in line, and brought a cone to a homeless boy watching nearby.
Lieutenant Cosset walked away feeling good; feeling like the chivalrous knight he always dreamed he would be.
That ice cream was indeed the best in London, he thought.
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Each week, Alastair Forbes presents one of his own photos. We have the honor of writing 100-200 words based upon the photo prompt. Anyone can join in on the creative fest. That means, you! Here’s the original prompt: http://alastairsphotofiction.wordpress.com/2013/08/11/photo-fiction-august-11th-2013/
I love where your brain went on this one–the world needs more chivalrous knights! *applause*
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Thanks much! Now we just need a whole lot of that ice cream!
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Yes!! Mind if I cut in line?? 😀 Have a great day/evening.
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Love it! I’m all for chivalrous knights…on horses or not.
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Me too. We need more of them!
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A sweet tale indeed. Promoted from pauper to prince charming.
I do like the idea that Dante could be permanently employed 😉
I’ve gotten a tad behind in reading and mail. This might end up in moderation as I have two links I think you’ll enjoy. (Whenever, neither is long…) I’ve added to The Dragon tale you inspired:
http://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/norgard-a-dragon-tale/
And I played again at mixing forms for the Ligo Haibun challenge that you might enjoy:
(It wouldn’t post in WP so it is only available here)
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2013/08/just-saying-concrete-haibun-for.html
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Thank you so much! Yeah, it seems Dante has a new job.
I’ll be reading these pieces soon. Thanks for sharing them!
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Lovely piece I did so enjoy this one. Ice-cream stories are fun to read, for how can you go wrong with magic ice-cream.
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Thank you. Magic ice cream is always a good thing. Any little kid can tell you that. 😉
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Ice cream and magic, two wonderful ingredients! Lovely story. I like how the guy mellows thanks to the cone.
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They sure are. Cosset changes almost immediately when he gets his favorite without asking for it. It’s powerful magic. Thanks so much for your thoughts!
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I love how magic – was interpreted here – a truly smile inspiring story.
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That’s what I was hoping for, a smile. Glad to know it worked. Thanks much for sharing your thoughts.
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Haha! Lt. Cosset needs to be more like that in real life! Lovely little tale 🙂
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Indeed. Maybe he’s finally figured out the way, with the help of a little magic ice cream. 😉
Thanks so much for your thoughts!
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Who would not love this magic Ice cream and this lovely tale.
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Aw, shucks. Thank you! I’d like some of that ice cream for sure.
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A sweet story for a sweet treat!
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Thank you so much!
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