Written for Trifextra: Week Ninety-Three. A limerick about lusty gods begins after the image. See the link below for the back story.
When Gods Lust
Trāyastriṃśa Nandi lusted for sweet Asura Riju
Her golden thighs and eyes he could never eschew
The mountain it shivered and shook
From the pleasures that they took
And peace flows from their joining on Mount Sumeru
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Author’s Note: Trāyastriṃśa who live in the second heaven sometimes squabble with the ousted Asuras. Sometimes there are marriages between the two. All is explained, and my limerick is based upon, the wiki page found here.
This week’s Trifextra is limited to 33 words on the weekends as always. This was a special challenge as it should be related to the Buddhist “Heaven of Thirty-Three gods.” Thus the research above. Here’s this week’s prompt: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/11/trifextra-week-ninety-three.html
This is a great poem – naughty and educational at the same time!
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Thank you, Christine! It’s the way limericks ought to be. 😉
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I agree with Christine. You do so much research for writing that’s why you are so good writer. Thanks for the link.
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Thanks so much, Indira. I really appreciate that. 🙂
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Nice write!
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Thank you!
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Witty and concise 🙂
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Thanks so much, Imaginator!
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I’m in awe! A beautiful poem . . . that rhymes! You hit it out of the ballpark! 😀
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Thanks so much, Linda!
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Nicely done!
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Thank you!
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Now, that’s a limerick I think the Gods would like!
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Yup. A little lust, romance, illicit dalliances. What more could a god ask for?
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This poem rocks
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Rock on, brother, and thanks mucho!
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Would that peace always came about this way!
I always love a limerick!
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Wouldn’t the world be grand if the world worked like that? People giving up guns for copies of the Kama Sutra. And if you love limericks, you’re a good soul. 😉
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Sensual imagery and I like the rhythm-great pic to complement it too:-)
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Glad you liked it! The pic was harder to find than I expected, but worth it.
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🙂
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