Chain Writing Game – Episode 13

Time for the Chain writing game, started by Kerrie Salsac. First post is here: http://kerrieanns.wordpress.com/2013/12/28/the-chain-writing-game/

Click the linky to get caught up.

Episode 13

When the trunk opened again, Jimmy punched her hard. Darkness followed the pain.

She awoke on a stained stone floor. A door creaked open. George and an Arabic man entered. “And here she is, as promised,” said George.

“You don’t tie her?”

“She’s harmless, Agrit,” said George. “Now lets deal. She has skills.”

She turned her back as George listed a litany of acts she’d performed out of love. She felt sick.

Eventually, George left. “Alone at last, flower,” said Agrit, approaching her on the mattress. “Let’s see…”

She whirled, screwdriver in hand. It found the mark, in his eye-socket.

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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20 Responses to Chain Writing Game – Episode 13

  1. Oh god! He’s bleeding all over his $400 Turkish rugs! LOL

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  2. Danny James says:

    Eyes have it! Or not!

    DJ

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  3. kerrieanns says:

    Skills? Are these household skills or do we have a very special girl on our hands?
    I just love the brutal end to this scene! Hurray for Cindy the vicious heroine 😛

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    • EagleAye says:

      Thank you! We’ll have to see what these “skills” become. Cindy may be quite the surprise. Normally, Cindy is quite sweet and mostly thinks about buying thank-you cards for people. But she’s a survivor, and only know is she realizing it.

      By the way, loving this writing game of yours. 🙂

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  4. Lyn says:

    Couldn’t happen to a nicer guy (insert vicious smile here). I hope the screwdriver she used was a ten-inch Philips-head.

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  5. draliman says:

    Yes! Apparently Cindy’s “skills” include a pretty good aim 🙂

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  6. The Chain Writing Game has a FB page like us and come on over.

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