The Chain Writing Game v5.0: Episode 23

Kerrie Ann Salsac’s Chain Writing Game continues in week 5. The game where each participant adds a piece of the story. Ben has a chance with the girl of his dreams, but what twisted events can change the story? What will happen? It’s all up to us who play the game to imagine what comes next!

Episode 23

“That’s my rich uncle, Victor’s private phone number,” said Ben.

“That explains a lot.”

“What are you saying?

Crunching sounds indicated their barricade was collapsing. Kelly grabbed Ben’s hand and she led him to another stairwell. “We have to get to the top floor. There’s a control console there.”

Ben gasped as they ran up the stairs, “If the BIUs don’t kill me these stairs will.”

Kelly ignored this. “There’s a vial embedded in each BIU. A signal from the control console can release a poison that kills the BIUs instantly.”

“That’s handy.”

“It’s a failsafe for the BIU handlers.”

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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16 Responses to The Chain Writing Game v5.0: Episode 23

  1. Kelly sure know a lot about these creatures. Can she really be trusted?


    • EagleAye says:

      I’m not sure about that either. She’s definitely involved with the people that created them, but then she didn’t seem happy about seeing Horatio. I can see things with her going either way.


  2. Good job. You gave us a kill now to get upstairs.


  3. draliman says:

    Excellent. Light at the end of the tunnel!


  4. Al says:

    So that’s who it was 🙂


  5. J. Milburn says:

    I wonder if the BIU’s are intelligent enough to know about the failsafe. My gut says yes 😀 Boss fight!


    • EagleAye says:

      No doubt. I was thinking about writing an episode from their point of view. But I think we’re running out of episodes so I decided not to pursue that. It’s definitely coming to a Boss fight.


  6. Danny James says:

    What doesn’t Kelly know?



    • EagleAye says:

      Yeah, she seems to know everything. The way I see it, she is what the BIUs are being tested against. She would have to know about the failsafe or she’d be a real sicko to agree to participate in the test. She would agree to being a “tester” if she knew that ultimately the creatures could be shut down before killing her.


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