The Last Demon Hunt
Demons are real.
Curiously, it was science that proved these magical, mythical creatures really exist. It was the invention of hyperspace travel that did it. Our universe is like living on the outer ring of an onion. Traveling through hyperspace was like running to the other side of the onion, but traveling through the much shorter, inner rings to get there. Getting to the star, Wolf 359, took days not centuries. After going down into hyperspace, it was like traveling through Faust’s Nine Levels of Hell except there’s really millions of levels. It was there that voyagers discovered creatures in the chaos of hyperspace.
My sister was scientist, mapping the shortest distances through hyperspace, when she was killed by a demon. I became enraged, and I became an ardent demon-killer. The idea of killing them all would drive me for decades.
On that fateful day, I was hunting Class 11 demons like usual. My spaceship’s hyperdrive was operating, thus opening a door for the demons. I was manipulating the holographic controller when alarms lit up on the display and I knew something was coming through. I engaged the magnetic containment field to hold it while I killed it. I was caught flatfooted when the creature arrived.
It was a Class 17.
I figured I was dead.
Out of 37 hunters who ever saw a Class 17, only two ever lived. Both set off self-destruct nukes before after escaping in a pod. My pod was malfunctioning. I watched the writhing mass of tentacles and mouths and hoped dying wouldn’t hurt too much. Then two tentacles moved exactly like they were typing on a keyboard, and the monster changed. Suddenly, it was a woman in a business suit.
She brushed herself down and said, “Really? In the middle of dinner?”
Not being instantly dead, I felt a little cocky. “Was it meatloaf?”
She cut right to the chase. “Look, you demon hunters have got to stop.”
“No way!” I spat. “Not while you monsters still exist.”
“Monsters?” She crossed her arms. “You still don’t know, do you? Any conscious creature, like you humans, is a multi-dimensional creature. They enter hyperspace, unknowingly, in their sleep. But if you look at something in hyperspace, you’re only seeing part of it. Could you recognize a car if you saw only a single molecule of it? No!” She tapped at her keyboard, and changed into a butterfly. “This is what I look like in your home dimension.” The butterfly tapped, and it changed back to a woman.
“I’ve been killing butterflies?”
“No. I’m a class 17, remember? An alien to you. Recently, we’ve learned a lot from studying your species’ computers. You, Adrien Pilcher, have been killing,” she consulted her display. “Class 11 demons, right?”
“Yes. Killing those evil things.”
“Evil? That’s looking at them in hyperspace where you can’t see all of a creature. Know what a Class 11 looks like in your dimension?”
“No.”
She pointed at me.
I staggered. “You mean…humans?
“Yes…you’ve been killing Human beings in their dreams. Who’s evil now?”
_________________________________
Written for Tipsy Lit. Each week, Tipsy Lit offers a new writing challenge. This week, each 500 word flash fiction entry must be about something that appears to be good, is actually evil or vice-versa. I hope my piece fits the bill. Here is this week’s original prompt: http://tipsylit.com/2014/04/07/prompted-good-vs-evil/
More great answers to the prompt can be found here: http://tipsylit.com/2014/04/11/prompted-link-up-good-vs-evil/
Ha! Great twist! And I totally see that as a possibility. Only Class 11, huh?
LikeLike
Thanks Wendy! It seemed plausible to me. Yeah, we’re Class 11, but hey, that’s still better than 10. π Thanks much for stopping in!
LikeLike
Pingback: Polling Prompted: Good vs. Evil | Tipsy Lit
Oooh i do like a good sci-fi.
good story damn good story.
So we basically been travelling through our own back yard. Ha ha and here we were thinking aliens so cool.
So much fun readin. Thank you π
LikeLike
Thanks much, Crow. I appreciate the encouraging thoughts. I’m very happy to hear you liked it. Yes, we didn’t investigate thoroughly enough to understand what our “demons” are. Good thing one could explain it. Thank you for the visit!
LikeLike
Fantastic! Such a great imagination.
LikeLike
Thank you, Jen! I appreciate that. π
LikeLike
Really enjoyed this! The whole thing reminded me of sci-fi stuff I used to devour all the time π Thanks for posting – I usually read your stuff on on Al’s Sunday Photo Fiction. Great to read you here too!!
LikeLike
Cool. That’s great to hear, Raven. I still read SciFi. I’m a bit of a fanatic about it. π I can’t help it if it oozes out my pores. It’s good to see you here too. Small world, yes? Thanks for reading!
LikeLike
Yes! Small world in a good way π
LikeLike
Brilliant. What an ending!!
LikeLike
Thank you! I was hoping had had a good “kaboom” for an ending. Thanks for visiting, Lyn!
LikeLike
Brilliant punch at the end! The true essence of the art of the short story – good stuff!
LikeLike
Wow. Thank you for the glowing comments. I really appreciate that. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks much for reading!
LikeLike
Great, really great but what are other ten. I’m scared.
LikeLike
I think most of the other ten are humans as well. The type of demon is mostly determined by the type of mind. By the time you get to Class 17, the mind is an alien one. in this story, the alien was just very advanced. Glad you enjoyed the story!
LikeLike
So true , they have to be human only.
LikeLike
Wow, what a letdown for him. Great twist.
LikeLike
It definitely results in a major life change for him. Glad you enjoyed the twist. π
LikeLike