A Good Wish – Sunday Photo Fiction

Photo by: Alastair Forbes

A Good Wish

Ling carefully started the incense in the dragon figurine. She smiled down at her precocious 8-year old. Ling was happy that Maddie received her father’s Welsh eyes and not his nose. Luckily, she gained Ling’s cheeks and lips. Her daughter was perfect. “Now remember, Mr. Hiu said to be careful. It has to be a good wish.” She tucked Maddie in and kissed her forehead before heading downstairs.

Maddie sneaked outside her door when she heard them whispering in the kitchen. Their voices had become more strained and desperate in the past few months.

“It was just 20 Quid, honey. Down from 250. We saved a lot.” said Ling.

“Yeah sure, sure,” groused Henry. “And the creature’s nature would be defined by the wish made to the dragon. It’s all a show to make you buy. That dragon burner only worth 5 pounds easily.”

“She hardly has any toys, darling.”

“I know, but look at these bills. If this keeps up, we’ll lose the house and the car. We’re nearly ruined!”

“If I see another banker in a suit at our door…” growled Ling.

Maddie slipped back into room and kneeled before the gently smoking figurine. “I wish mummy and daddy were happy and calm like before, and they have everything they want. And they need someone to guard them from the men in suits.” She blew a kiss at the little dragon burner and climbed into bed.

In the morning, Ling screamed.

Henry awoke suddenly and looked around in shock. Slowly, he grinned. “Hey! Satin sheets.”

Ling pointed out the window. “Our house! It’s beside a cliff!”

Henry joined her. “Wow. Nice view.”

Ling dashed out the door. A few moments later, she screamed again and dashed back into the bedroom. Henry pointed at the purple silk pajamas he’d put on. “Look honey! All our stuff is here, but there’s new stuff!”

“There’s a THING downstairs,” she shouted.

“We have a downstairs?”

“It’s got Madison.”

That got his attention. With a grimace he hauled a cricket bat out of the closet and raced down the unfamiliar marble staircase. Ling clung to his pajama bottoms as she followed.

The kitchen looked ultra-modern, with gleaming new pans hanging over a table inlaid with mother-of-pearl and gold. The creature sat at the table examining a game board. Light from the window spilled rainbows from its opalescent scales. Tendrils wriggled from the Chinese dragon’s muzzle. It turned its jade eyes to Madison as she moved two pieces from the board. “Well done, Madison,” it cheered. “You’re very good at this.”

Maddie hugged the dragon and said, “Thanks, Chien Fu. You’re a great teacher.”

“Madison!” stage-whispered Ling.

She rushed over to them and hugged them both.

“Morning!” said Chien Fu. “Fancy a cup of tea?” It held out a cup with a short arm.

“Uh,” said Henry.

“‘Uh?’ That’s your war cry?” scolded Ling.

Chien Fu waved the cup. “I hope you don’t mind my redecorating.” It pointed out the window to the drive outside. “Your Aston-Martin supercar just arrived.”

Henry stared outside and dropped the cricket bat.

With a scowl at Henry, Ling retrieved the bat and advanced on Chien Fu.

The dragon calmly sipped more tea and held out an envelope. “I hope a monthly dividend of £237,000 from your investments is acceptable?”

Ling stared and dropped the bat. She nodded numbly.

“Smashing,” grinned Chien Fu. “Now that that’s sorted out, anyone for a game of Mahjong?”
Each week, photographer Alastair Forbes sacrifices a virgin photo to a dragon, and compels us all to write flash fiction from the photo. Look here for more stories based upon the photo above: http://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2014/12/07/sunday-photo-fiction-december-7th-2014/

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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13 Responses to A Good Wish – Sunday Photo Fiction

  1. I hope you’re giving out dragons as Christmas gifts? I can email my address. 🙂

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  2. Lyn says:

    I adore Chien Fu’s voice. What a super story! If you’ve any spare dragons around, I wouldn’t mind one – any size you can ride would do 🙂

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    • EagleAye says:

      I think a Chinese dragon with a British accent is amusing. I couldn’t wait to do it. Glad you enjoyed him. I’ll be sending a dragon your way…air mail of course. 😉


  3. JED says:

    If you have a mansion there is plenty of space for the dragon to hang out. I don’t care the size, I’ll invite him in and play games all day. Go ahead and send one my way.

    Great story.

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    • EagleAye says:

      Haha! I hope you have an Aston-Martin. They like taking long drives in the country in convertibles…or at least a car with a sun room. They need room for their head. I’ll ship one out straightaway. I hope you’re really skilled at Backgammon. 😉

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  4. draliman says:

    Ha! What a cultured dragon 🙂 That’s one way to escape the bankers – suddenly and unexpectedly move house. I love the line “We have a downstairs?”
    Hopefully there won’t be a “price” to pay for this wish.

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    • EagleAye says:

      Hehe. He’s most civilized. And the bankers will soon be trying to be his best friend. Dragons can make these change, overnight.

      If the dragon had a different aspect there might be a price, but since the wish that created him was out of kindness and giving, there won’t be. That’s why the wish had to be “a good wish.” It defines the character of the dragon.

      Thanks for stopping in! 🙂


  5. I kept waiting for him to eat the child or something. This seems to easy. Is it this easy? I want a dragon!

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    • EagleAye says:

      Hehe. When you’ve made a Good Wish, it is. Most people don’t, and they get eaten. I’ll send a dragon out your way. Would you like one in red, green, blue, gold, or silver? 😉


  6. Al says:

    Oh that’s brilliant. Can I have one of them? Although knowing my luck, I would phrase it wrong and have something eat me hehe

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