In Her Eyes – Gargleblaster Microstories #216

Tristin found pity in her eyes.

Across the cafeteria table, Evette said, “Sweetie, Brian already won my heart with his poetry.”

Brian was no poet. Tristin handed her the original pages.

Evette smiled, and Tristin watched something new alight in her eyes

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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14 Responses to In Her Eyes – Gargleblaster Microstories #216

  1. joetwo says:

    Brian! The cheating swine!

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  2. Shey says:

    Nice ending. 🙂

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  3. Cyn K says:

    So was Tristin pulling a Cyrano or did Brian plagiarize without his knowledge?

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  4. Michael says:

    Point, Tristan! Game, set, match. Nicely done!

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  5. R. Todd says:

    I think this is how I won my wife. Either that or my dashing good looks. Nope, definitely the poetry.

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  6. Meg says:

    I love Cyrano. Nice twist, Eric!

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  7. Beware false poets, especially that dastardly Brian. Good one, Eric. (I also enjoyed your lovely purple photos!)

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