An Intimidating Woman – Shapeshifting 13

An Intimidating Woman

Scott saw her in the bar mirror. Arianne was beautiful, but alone. And why the jar with two apparent olives? He decided to investigate.

“I’m Scott,” he said.

“Before starting,” said Arianne. “Let’s make an agreement,”


“You never cheat, or…”

“Or what?”

She held up the jar. “Yours join my ex-boyfriend’s.”
Written for the Grammar Ghoul Press’ Shapeshifting 13 writing challenge. This week, we get 52 words and must use the words “olive”‘ and “mirror.” Look here to see what other folks wrote:


About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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21 Responses to An Intimidating Woman – Shapeshifting 13

  1. Lyn says:

    And Scott said, “Nuts to that!”
    Arianne replied, “That’s the idea, sweetie.”
    Lyn says, “Oh Eric, I just shakes me head.” 😀

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  2. Tony says:

    HEY-OH!!!!! Yikes! Wowza! Perfection! I don’t have many words for this besides–BRILLIANT PIECE!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Michael says:

    I think that might put a damper on the relationship. Yipes.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Jen says:

    wowski! lol nice one!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Clever use of olives in a story.

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