Rebuffed – Gargleblaster Microstories #234

Officer Ferrelli was handsome, courageous, and he’d saved them from muggers.

He was Karina’s dream. She began unbuttoning her blouse. “Let me thank you.”

Ferrelli looked past her. “Your boyfriend is right there.”

“Oh. I was dumping him tonight.”

“So, he’s available?”


About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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21 Responses to Rebuffed – Gargleblaster Microstories #234

  1. anusrini20 says:

    😀 I like the twist!

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  2. Ha ha ha, I literally laughed out loud at this one! Way to turn the tables and HOW! This definitely made my day 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Francesca Smith says:

    Haha, brilliant!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. OHHHHHHHH!! Now there’s a twist! LMAO!! This is a gem, a true gem. Love the way you inject humor in your writing. Your sense of humor is delicious. It matches my own…and this made me laugh. Loved it! ♥


  5. Christine says:

    Not sure how I feel about the idea of the girl paying for the officer’s services, but the last line was a great surprise!

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    • EagleAye says:

      She was awfully forward about it. Certainly not the demure type. She wasn’t looking to pay as much as looking for a new boyfriend. Still, I’m glad you enjoyed the finish. Thanks Christine! 🙂


  6. Made me Laugh Out Loud 🙂

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  7. R. Todd says:

    Saw this coming (I think we think/write too much alike), but still funny.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. jannatwrites says:

    Ouch. I cringed. … that would be embarrassing!

    Liked by 1 person

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