I watched the vulture looking at me hungrily as I lay on the ground bleeding and injured. I would die as I lay broken in the desert of Arizona. The medical nanites in me, that I invented, could insure I would live forever. All they needed were proteins to repair my body in mere minutes. My life could be saved by a common candy bar.
The world’s first immortal man was going to die.
More vultures crowded around to watch me die. I pulled my pistol with my only uninjured arm, preparing to end it all. I was in agony as it was. I didn’t want to feel the vultures eating me alive. I held the gun up, and everything went black.
I awoke with most of my injuries healed. I can only guess what I did while in shock. I swallowed another bloody, protein-filled gobbit as I sat in a pile of discarded black feathers. A thought occurred to me:
Vultures: They do a body good.
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Written for Mondays Finish the Story. This week, the opening sentence is, βI watched the vulture looking at me hungrily as I lay on the ground bleeding and injured.β Look here to see the stories other folks wrote: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/10/26/mondays-finish-the-story-october-26th-2015/
Nice twist
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Thank you! π
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I agree. Nice twist.
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Thanks kindly! I appreciate that. π
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A good use of a vulture
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For once, Humans can say, backatcha Vultures! π Thanks much!
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That’s what I would have done! Fun read!
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Yep. It’s eat or be eaten. π Glad you had fun. Thanks much, Joy! π
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Good story. I thought the vulture would eat him and then become indestructible. It is good he ate the vulture instead. π
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Ooh, I like the way you think. I may use that angle in a different story. π Thanks a bunch, Deborah!
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I know demented π
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Deborah, don’t you think he can think up enough crazy stuff without you giving him more ideas π
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I know, I have some crazy ideas as well. π
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I had visions of the nanites joining ‘hands’ and leaping out of his body to strangle the vulture and then springing back inside his body like a slinky to heal him. π It reminded me a bit of that scene in Capricorn One, where the James Brolin kills and eats a rattlesnake before it gets him.
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Hey, that’s a pretty cool idea too. Attack nanites! That could be pretty deadly and invisible to the naked eye. There’s another story there too. π I loved that movie, Capricorn One. It was fun. Cheers! π
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That’s why it’s a good idea to always have carryon luggage.
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Haha! So true!
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Oh! I can see the headlines now…New and Improved protein-filled bar…VULTURE. They are so much in demand, the stores can not keep them on them on the shelves!
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Haha! Yeah I imagined they’d just “fly” off the shelves. π
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Hahaha! I loved the twist at the end. I thought he was going to be a goner but he turned it around in his favor. Better to eat them they have them eat you! Great story!!
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Hehe. It’s the law of the jungle. Eat or be eaten. π Glad you liked it. Thanks kindly! π
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This made my day! Haha
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Cool. I love hearing that. Thanks so much! π
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I salute your imaginative mind.
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Thank you! *blush blush*
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A little ewwww, but nice ending. I am happy that he is still alive
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Yeah, it is eew, but sometimes survival depends on it. Glad you enjoyed the end. Thanks much!
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Good ending twist, Eric. Hereafter, he should carry a candy bar as well as a gun. Then he won’t have to eat raw vulture. Well done with dark humor. π — Suzanne
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Yeah, if carrying a gun is part of his regular kit, then a candy bar should be there too. I can’t imagine vulture tastes so good. π Glad you enjoyed the finish. Thanks much, Suzanne! π
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I had a nice chuckle at the end where the vultures were the twist. Nicely done Eric! Thanks again! ^..^
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That’s awesome. I was hoping for a chuckle or two. Thanks so much, Barb! π
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I like it. How many injured arms did you have? π
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Hehe. Just the one. π Thanks much! π
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