Doctor Ethan Ford sat on a park bench beside the stream. He watched a mother duck leading her ducklings into the water and new experiences. Periodically, Ethan muttered an observation about them into his small recorder.
His neighbor, Desmond Knowles found him there and joined him with a grin. “Hey Doc. Good to see you doing something real.”
Being two generations older than Desmond, Ethan wasn’t always sure what the younger man was getting at. “Eh?”
“You know. No robots or mechanically things.” He pointed to the ducks. “Today it’s natural, real things.”
Ethan grunted. “Actually, I’m continuing my research.”
“How so?”
Ethan lifted his cane with a liver-spotted hand and pointed, “Duckling number seven over there has an implanted Artificial Sentience. I’m observing its development.”
Desmond looked horrified. “That poor duck! Why isn’t his head all blocky and stuff?”
“The AS doesn’t need a lot of room. Nanites built a structure to house the AS. The duck’s brain is still there, operating normally while the AS ‘borrows’ it. The duck’s personality is just asleep until we’ve finished the research. The duck is completely unharmed.”
“But why mess with a cute little duck? Just write your computer program and be done with it.”
Ethan cleared his throat and entered teaching mode. “You program computers, but I believe an Artificial Sentience must be grown or better yet, evolved. When people think of ASes or AIs the first thing they think of is Skynet judging humanity a failure and killing everyone with robotic Terminators. While an unlikely scenario, the possibility exists. I believe an AS that just pops into existence cannot understand humanity. We evolved in an environment of competition. Kill or be killed. Only the strongest survive.
This natural development largely dictates how we behave. Our sentience tells us be honest, use fair play, and be kind. The same people who espouse such ideals will later digress into the aggressive behavior of animals evolved from competition. We try to ruin business competitors and overcome social competition with lies. We’re anything but fair and kind n practice. How could an emerging Artificial Sentience witness such a duality and not see a failed species?”
“Beats me, Doc.”
“This AS is going through a rapid evolution. It’s programmed to adapt to each new environment and learn about living from different animals. It’s been a Caterpillar, a Lizard, and a Duck so far. It will slowly evolve through the animals, learning about them, until it arrives at Humans.”
“Humans?” squeaked Desmond. “That ain’t right, Doc. It’s unnatural!”
“Oh it won’t harm anyone. We already have Human volunteers. They’ll be well-paid.”
“Sorry Doc, but that’s just creepy mad-scientist stuff.”
“I understand,” soothed Ethan. “How’s that girl of yours?”
Desmond grinned. “Good. I think she’s the one. I’m gonna propose.”
“That’s terrific, Desmond. Congratulations!”
“Speaking of that. I gotta make dinner reservations.”
Desmond left and Ethan spoke into his recorder once more. “Subject 13EX-472 is developing as expected. It is adapting to the ways and mores of its new society with enthusiasm. Development is almost complete. I expect that we can remove the AS from volunteer Desmond Knowles in a few weeks.”
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Written for Sunday Photo Fiction. Look here for the original prompt and, under the blue link, many more stories: https://sundayphotofictioner.wordpress.com/2016/01/31/sunday-photo-fiction-january-31st-2016/
Great surprise ending….it’s nice that Desmond is doing his part in society….how does the payment work?…is it the end result that equals payment?
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Well, now that’s an interesting question. The “real” Desmond is paid $150,000. On the other hand, after the AS is removed he’ll wake up never remembering what the AS did while borrowing his body. He won’t know this girl. Will she still like Desmond? That’s a whole other story. Thanks much! 🙂
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Nice! Not bad money for the “unknown.” 🙂
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I was wondering about the payment too! That’s a hefty sum, but interesting to think of the relationship changes between Desmond and his girl when he wakes up. Would the girl go a little crazy thinking she fell in love with an Artificial Sentience?
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It is a tidy sum. Then again, considering that someone is literally messing with their mind and using their body, it’s a fair sum as well. And the girlfriend, well that begs a lot of questions. Would he pursue the relationship? Would he even like her? If he does continue should he tell her what happened? How would she take the news? That’s a whole can of worms. I’ll be thinking about answers to these questions.
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You seriously have a fantastic story idea here just waiting to be explored.
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I really appreciate that. Thanks so much for the kind words. 🙂
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Great story. Thanks for stopping by my blog. I always try to check out the new folks to see what they’re up to. I’ll be back…(she said in her best terminator voice) 🙂
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Thank you! I’m actually one of the “old folks” just returning from a short hiatus. I look forward to seeing you again…even as a Terminator. 😉
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Whoa. That’s a sci-fi novel or movie in the making right here. So many questions about the moralities and the science. Have you considered developing this idea a little more?
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Actually, yes I have. I didn’t start off with that intention, but when I read through it again I began to see all sorts of permutations. This could go in a lot of directions. There’s a short story contest running at Grammar Ghoul Press. I think I may expand this one into a short story. It has plenty of room for it.
Thanks so much! 🙂
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Omg, I’m planning on submitting something for the short story contest too. Your story is going to be a tough one to beat! Good luck 🙂
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So cool that you’re joining in. Good luck! 🙂
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Thanks! You too 🙂
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It reminds me of the series Dollhouse. That twist at the end, making it seem like it his girl. Great story Eric 🙂
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I might have to go back to that series. I watched a few episodes then got distracted with something else. Glad you enjoyed the twist in this. Thanks so much, Al! 🙂
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It’s unfortunate it was cancelled. It really had the scope of being something good.
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Ha, great ending! Makes one wonder if our free-will are just programmed choices.
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Very creative story. The ending was great, of course, but I simply enjoyed the premise. I think the Dr. made some compelling arguments about the development of thought and behavior and humanity’s struggle between our higher aspirations and our basic instincts. I also enjoyed the method that he employed (implanting the device in different, evolving life forms) as a fascinating plot device. Great story!
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