“Dad, what are all these boats doing?” said sixteen-year old Brandon. He pointed at the boats crowding into to village’s harbor.
“They’re all medical people, son,” said Vince. “They’re here to help.”
Brandon frowned. “I didn’t know we had problems.”
“Well, it turns out our village was founded in a radiation zone centuries ago. Who knew?”
“Radiation? What’s that?”
“It changes people from the norm. Makes them different somehow.”
“But Dad we’re normal, right? At least I’ve never seen anyone who looked weird. Is there something wrong with me?”
Vince clapped him on the shoulder. “Of course not, son. You’re a good-looking boy. Don’t worry. In fact, I understand there’s lots of pretty young nurses in those boats. You might find a good woman among them.”
Brandon perked up. “You think so?”
“Absolutely! Look, here come some nurses right now.”
Brandon grinned large, and he waved with the hand protruding from his forehead.
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Written for the Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers writing challenge.
Great twist! But don’t mention the forehead hand too loudly, everybody will want one! ☺
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Haha! No doubt. It could become the newest fashion in body modification. 😉 Thanks much, Matthew! 🙂
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Well, you have to hand it to Brandon, he’s ahead of his time for love.
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Haha! Yes you do have to “hand” it to him. Trouble is, when he swears his love he’ll have problems putting his hand over his heart. 😉
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The humorous twist — gotta love it! Let’s hope the nurses do to.
A real smiler of a story.
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You never know. There’s someone for everyone. Glad to hear you got a smile. It’s what I was hoping for. Thanks so much! 🙂
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hahahahaha hilarious end! nice take on the prompt.
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Thanks so much! I’m glad you got a laugh. 🙂
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The only problem that I can see is that they’ll have to buy gloves in threes. Good one!
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Hehe. I’ll bet the glove company will be pretty happy with it though. 😉 Thanks Joe! 🙂
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Hahahahaha! Surprise twist at the end! I can see this hand dangling from his forehead! Cute story!
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Hehe. You know I love a twist. Good to know you got a clear visual. Thanks kindly! 🙂
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I love the twists in your stories!
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Aw, poor guy I feel for him. I think he’s going to find out he’s a bit weird looking. And many people are judgemental of that, especially young girls. But maybe he’s also very attractive even having the hand on his head. To bad he couldn’t be more like an Xmen 🙂
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Yeah, things aren’t going to go as smoothly as he hoped. But you never know, he might have other unusually placed appendages. That lucky, kind-hearted nurse who gives him a chance might enjoy a happy surprise. 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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Ahaha! Laughed so hard. Let’s hope he does 😂
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🙂 Very neat. Great write.
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Thanks kindly! 🙂
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I think they will need more than nurses,
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Hehe. You are so right. Luckily, some very talented surgeons are there too. 😉
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Poor guy….if he’s normal, I’m wondering what abnormal is!
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Right? That’s kinda scary to think about. 😉
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