Photo by: Shivangi Singh
Tobias and his work crew were fairly typical blue-collar men. Rhianna was lovely and talented. So when they saw what Rhianna was doing on the balcony, in full view of everyone, the crew couldn’t help but comment.
“Oh…My…God, I’m in heaven,” said Tobias, staring up at Rhianna’s efforts on the balcony.
“Woohoo!” exclaimed Marco. “That’s what I’m talkin’ ’bout!”
“She’s doing it where anyone can see,” crowed Vince.
“Look at those looong lines,” moaned Jimmy.
“That curve!” cooed Marco.
“How does she do that? It’s incredible!”
“So bold!” said Tobias, impressed. “She’s gotta be using oils.”
“I gotta get me summa dat!”
“I want it!”
“Me first!”
“Show us more!” called Marco.
“Yeah, let us see ALL of it!”
Rhianna grinned down at the excited men. “You really like it, boys?”
“Yeah, give us the full view. Let’s see it all!” answered Vince.
“Okay!” laughed Rhianna, and she showed them.
“Yowza!”
“Told you she was bold!”
Tobias grinned admiringly and pointed at the canvas. “She painted a cityscape in all orange tints!”
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Written for Flash Fiction For Aspiring Writers: https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/01/16/fffaw-challenge-week-of-january-17-2017/
EagleAye
Ha! Ha! A story you can read and let your imagination run wild! Great ending! 🙂
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Hehe. I was hoping imaginations would have some fun with this one. Glad the finish entertained. Thanks so much! 🙂
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Hahahaha! To say that I thought it was about something else would be an understatement. LOL! So funny! Great twist at the end!
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I guess I did lead the reader down the garden path…just a little. 😉 Glad you had fun. It’s always my goal. Thanks very much! 🙂
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Hee hee. I guess it would be hard to photograph such a picture owing to the risk of over-exposure! ☺
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Haha! And that is the naked truth! 😉
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Obviously the lads are art connoisseurs 🙂
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They certainly are, and they obviously get excited about it. 😉
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Not the ending I was expecting that’s for sure. Great!
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Good to know you had a fun surprise. Thanks Keith! 🙂
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Hilarious. Context is everything in this case like lol.
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Hehe. It most certainly is. Thanks so much! 🙂
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That was refreshing! Knowing it had to be PG 13 I thought she was painting the railings! liked your different approach on this prompt.
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Hehe. You anticipated me broadly at least. I figured folks would, because yeah, it has to be PG-13 at a minimum. I’m happy you were refreshed. Thanks very much!
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