Jamal was one of the finest blues men in London. While busking near the market, his guitar case always overflowed with cash appreciation. His music was powerful, literally sweeping away his audience’s bad feelings. People walked away from Jamal feeling clean and happy. He sang:
Well I’m a blues broom for you
I’ll sweep away that bad doo-doo.
But there was a cost for absorbing all those blues. Now everyone’s troubles had become Jamal’s troubles. The blues weighed heavily on him. After a few hours he traveled to the park. A crowd of other street performers had collected to listen to Anita’s music. She sang:
So when your face is sad and wan
Just drop your blues inside my trash can
Soon Jamal felt fresh and clean. Still, he wondered how Anita recovered. Then as he turned a corner he found his answer. A musician played before the house of a prominent and self-aggrandizing politician. Raul sang:
Just take your blues into the blues dump
I’ll give ’em all to this pompous chump!
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Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers: https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/03/20/fffaw-challenge-week-of-march-21-2017/
Author’s Notes:
A “Busker” is a street performer: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Street_performance
This story was inspired by “Steamroller Blues” by James Taylor.
Not sure I want to listen to the blues after this. Might be catching.
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Naw, listening to the blues just takes them away. We can just hope all those blues then go to the proper, “receptacle.” 😉
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Hahahaha! Love how they gave each other their blues as a way to get rid of them. The ending is great! Just give them all to the pompous politician! Great story!!
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Hehe. I was saving the best for last. 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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Good music is all about emotion, great writing
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So true. Music that’s truly felt is so much better. Thanks kindly! 🙂
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Passing on the pain — oh, how I wish it were so! It’s true, though, that music soothes the soul. This reminds me that I’ve been listening to too much radio and not enough music.
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Haha! I know exactly what you mean. Music made to make money on the radio just doesn’t have enough soul. Real music music touches the heart and heals it.
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Well, the only radio I listen to is NPR, and that’s mostly news and story telling and humor. They do occasionally have music, like on Prairie Home Companion, and that’s almost always great. I’d probably listen to more radio (or more music) if I drove to work, but I walk.
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I especially enjoyed the last two lines. Excellent take.
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Glad to hear it. Thanks so much! 🙂
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Good one!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Lovely take. At each juncture they find support for each other. I love listening to blues – emotive and what not 🙂
I am leaving a link of my YouTube video in the comments. Thank you for checking it out.
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Thank you! I love the blues too. Always makes me feel better. I’ll check out your vid soon. Thanks for sharing! 🙂
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