Sammy was a young mouse, clever in some ways, naive in others. He liked to read the books he found in human debris, and he loved to cook. Sammy cooked extraordinarily well.
George the snake was getting old and tired. When he stumbled across Sammy the Naive but Talented, he quickly hatched a plan. “You make my food, Sammy,” he warned. “Or you’ll be my food!”
Sammy was terrified, and he believed he could never escape the menacing snake. So Sammy got cooking. He made Beetle Pie, Lizard Kiev, and Slug Pate. Sammy enjoyed the cooking. Still, he longed for his independence.
One day he found a huge box of curious tubes. They tasted peppery, but attempts to grill them over a fire proved disastrous. After a little reading, he realized what they were.
Sammy smiled.
“George!” called Sammy, carrying along a Roach Cupcake. “Time to celebrate!”
“It is?” George swallowed the cupcake, sparkling tubes and all. “What are we celebrating?”
As the fireworks began exploding within the snake, Sammy said, “My Independence Day!”
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Happy Fourth of July!
Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers: https://flashfictionforaspiringwriters.wordpress.com/2017/07/03/fffaw-challenge-week-of-july-4-2017-2/
A fantastic take on the photo prompt! I really enjoyed reading this; thank you for sharing! It’s so great that you managed to word independence day in there, too. Really well done! 🙂
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. This is one way I wanted to celebrate the 4th.
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Well done! 😉
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Thanks bunches Courtney! 🙂
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This reminded me of Ratatouille, although that rat never got stuck cooking for a snake. I’m not sure why the fireworks would explode once they’re inside the snake, but hey, in a world where snakes and mice talk and cook (and eat delicacies like Slug Pate), maybe fireworks are different too. 😉
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Hehe. The fuses were already lit. That’s why they were sparkling. And yeah, when animals can talk (and read) anything is possible. 😉 Thanks Joy! 🙂
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Hahahaha! Cute story! Sammy is one smart mouse to pull over such a firecracker of a trick! LOL!
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Yep. He declared his liberty…with a bang. 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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Hahaha! Great story!
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Great job. The mouse and the snake alluding to a lot of things – people, countries.. what not? Well written. Cheers, Varad
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Well, sure. George the Snake was King George III of England. Sammy represents America as Uncle Sam. I like sneaking stuff like that in there. 😉 Thanks much! 🙂
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Yes, if Ratatouille were a mouse. Nice take on the prompt and weaving Fourth of July fireworks into the tale. Seems snakes will eat anything.
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Hehe. Especially old, lazy snakes. Glad you liked this. Thanks very much! 🙂
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Lovely story !
Happy 4th of July! 🙂
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Thank you. And Happy Fourth to you! 🙂
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Happy July 4th, that ugh not for George the snake! 🙂
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Same to you! And yeah, this year, George was the fireworks display. 😉
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Well that party was a real blast. Clever Sammy! Happy 4th to you and your family, Eric 🙂
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Haha! It was a bangin’ party to be sure. 😉 Thanks so much, Lyn! 🙂
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Enjoyed the chuckling this story caused…:) The menu is quite interesting too! Such a clever little mouse….a free one now.
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Hehe. Yes he is. Owns his own restaurant now, though still isn’t serving humans. Hmm… 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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Oh, you are clever! Excellent! I loved this tale.
The Lesson
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Glad to hear that. Thank you very much! 🙂
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Haha very humorous as ususl. A great fable type story. Good for Sammy the mouse, I could picture the snake exploding and lighting up the sky 🙂
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Haha! Perhaps going forward they’ll call that firework, “The Snake”? 😉 Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much, Mandibelle!
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Haha it makes me think of an improved ‘Wacking Day’ from the Simpsons, if you can remember that classic episode. Instead of wacking snakes we now blow them up with fireworks lol.
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😀
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