In 2062, organized crime was a distant memory in Columbia. Few know how it really ended.
Bogata’s last crime lords all dropped off the map in the poor neighborhood of Vista Despejada. That power vacuum brought up-and-coming crime lord Thiago Escavedo into Camila’s Needlepoint Shop. He grinned at the old woman working industriously. He hadn’t even bothered bringing his henchmen. The old crone would sell her shop for pennies just like the other businesses on Rio Carlo Ave.
“I’ll give you 1,000 pesos for your shop,” said Thiago to Camila. “And then I will let your family live.” He grinned malevolently. “Trust me. It’s a kind offer.”
“Of course, Dearie,” said eighty-year old Camila, offering no resistance. “Let me find the deed.”
As she rummaged, Thiago examined a peculiar hanging quilt. Red stains splashed all over it.
“Abstract art on a quilt?” snorted Thiago. “What was your inspiration?”
Behind him, Camila finished screwing the silencer on her 9mm pistol. “Oh, just the last men who made kind offers.”
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Written for What Pegman Saw: https://whatpegmansaw.com/2017/07/08/bogota-columbia/
Ah, a black widow! Great story. Love the atmosphere.
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Yep. And she was even more dangerous in her youth. 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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A Nagual is a magician or witch some say has the power to transform into an animal but who have other mystic powers linked with pre-Columbian shamanistic practices. Perhaps she is one of them.
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Ooh. I’ve never heard of that, but it sounds really cool. Don’t be surprised if a Nagual shows up in a future story. And who knows, maybe she is a Nagual. 😉 Thanks James! 🙂
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Nagual or not, she is one spunky woman. Wonder what she was during her hey days. Great story and excellent writing.
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Ever hear of Manuel Noriega, former dictator of Panama? One day he pissed her off. Within a year the Americans arrived. Yeah – Camila was never someone to fool with. 😉 Thanks so much, Neel! 🙂
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Superb story! Loved it.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Ha ha ha ha!! Awesome granny that one! That is who I will be if a crime-lord ever comes a knockin’ 😉
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Hehe. Just remember to say “of course, Dearie” so the bad guy relaxes. Then load up the nail gun while he isn’t looking. 😉 Thanks Courtney! 🙂
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Hm, I am formulating a theory about how the crime wave mysteriously ended, and it has to do with a feisty older lady who only wants to do her sewing and not be bothered by thugs. Fun twist ending, and interesting take on the prompt!
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Well, you know, the Colombian government will never admit to that. They claim they did it all on their own. Curiously though, the government no longer requires her to pay taxes. Hmm… 😉 Thanks so much, Joy! 🙂
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I’m sure that’s just a coincidence, about the taxes… 🙂
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Dear Eric,
We need Camila and we need her now. 😀 Good one. I love how your mind works.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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We certainly do. We need a lot of them. 😉 Thanks so much, Rochelle! 🙂
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What a twist. Go, Granny Go! Very well imagined and written. Cheers, Varad
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Hehe. She isn’t nearly as harmless as she seems. Thanks kindly! 🙂
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Much respect for the lady. lol. Great story.
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Thank so much, Indira! 🙂
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