“Sinbad” was the first person to take Harry’s invention seriously.
So the fifteen-year old felt bad when FBI agents swept in and grabbed the Russian at Holbarth subway station, beside the payphone.
FBI Agent Knight said, “Lemme see that thing.”
Harry showed him the counter-gravity skateboard.
Knight snorted at the cobbled-together device. “A seasoned GRU agent got suckered by that crap?” Handing Harry $10, he sneered, “Your country appreciates your service. Go buy a comic book.”
Harry sped down the tunnel, hovering on counter-gravity fields. He had to get to Cabrese Station to answer the phone. The Israelis were offering $30,000,000.
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Written for the Friday Fictioneers: https://rochellewisoff.com/2017/07/26/28-july-2017/
Author’s Notes:
Everyone is familiar with the Russian KGB, but with the collapse of the USSR the KGB no longer exists. New spy agencies have replaced it.
Russian Intelligence Services:
FSB – Domestic Intelligence (Similar to FBI)
SVR – Foreign Intelligence
GRU – Military Foreign Intelligence: “The GRU is Russia’s largest foreign intelligence agency. In 1997 it deployed six times as many agents in foreign countries as the SVR, the successor of the KGB’s foreign operations directorate (PGU KGB).
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Foreign_Intelligence_Service_(Russia)
Seems like Agent Knight might not be the best choice for evaluating new inventions, and that this is going to bite him in the butt when his superiors find out. Hope Harry gets his big payout before the FBI catches up with him!
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Oh, Harry got paid alright. He now owns an island in the Mediterranean. Shortly afterward the State Department found out and then heads rolled. The FBI Director “retired.” A Deputy Assistant Director transferred to the Anchorage, Alaska office. Knight took over details shoveling manure into the FBI’s gardens. The US got Israel to share “Israel’s” counter-gravity tech in exchange for a multi-billion dollar arms deal. Yeah, it wasn’t a good day for the US intelligence services. 😉
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Ha ha, what a great epilogue! Poor Agent Knight might prefer that he was fired!
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Hehe. The FBI didn’t want to go easy on him. 🙂 😀
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Dear Eric,
Sell it to the Israelis. Good idea. They’ll turn it into something phenomenal. Like your cell phones? Say todah to an Israeli. 😉 just sayin’. I couldn’t help but see Marty McFly on the hover board. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Hehe. I wanted to be sure the good guys ended up with Harry’s tech. I guess I’ll be saying todah. I like my cell phone. 😉 I’m sure Mary McFly would love this skateboard. Maybe he got his from Harry? The Israelis? Thanks so much, Rochelle! 🙂
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Agent Knight makes the agent from Transformers look like he’s J.Edgar 😛
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Haha! Yeah, Knight is not giving the agency a good name. He’ll be lucky to command a detail counting pencils after this. 😉
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Ah chump change! Is that all?? It’s worth at least twice that!! 😉
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Haha! Sure is. Still, Harry is now fabulously wealthy. If he’s smart that will last him the rest of his life, provided he doesn’t spend it all on comic-based action figurines. 😉
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Exactly!!
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FBI, GRU, SVR, KGB … how you kept track of that bowl of international alphabet soup is beyond me. Mossad will defiantly have a decent weapon to use, then probably later, once it’s declassified, sell it to the toy market. Everybody happy.
Fun story, Eric.
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Hehe. I took extensive notes. 😉 I’m looking forward to declassified counter-gravity. I want to drive a car with it. 😉 Thanks so much! 🙂
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Oh well — you win a few; you lose a few. Uncle Sam can afford to miss a few. 🤑
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Yep. You can’t win ’em all. Uncle Same still ends up with the tech in the end, just with a little added egg on the face. 😉 Good to see you back, Christine!
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Thank you. Question: When you published your book on Kindle, did you format it yourself?
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Ah…yes I did. I’m hoping it wasn’t full of errors?
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Did you follow any particular guideline. I’ve seen various blogs that tell you “How to format” and there are a number of books. Anything help you?
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I read through Amazon’s tutorial on how to do it. You format it with Word and then they have an automatic error checker to look over it. It’s pretty straightforward.
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Ha! Great story 🙂
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Glad you liked it Thank you very much! 🙂
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Probably just as well the US military didn’t get hold of it – they’d weaponise anything.
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Counter-gravity? Oh, they’d weaponize that in a heart-beat. I understand the government tried to weaponize Jello. They had to cancel the project, though. The scientists ate all the testing material. 😉
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Yay for technology being sold! Well executed! 🙂
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Yep. It’s best if it get used. Thanks so much! 🙂
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