The Terror

“OMG,” said Brittany. “Her butt is so big!”

Though new to the school, Brittany’s looks ensured she was popular, and she used that popularity like a terror weapon.

“Don’t talk about Angie’s butt,” hissed the girls around her. “It’s not safe.”

“Why not?” she laughed. “It’s huge!”

In the locker room, Angie was shunned by the other girls. Alone, she took off her swimsuit and breathed a sigh of relief. It was hard to squeeze into that thing, but there were advantages…

As her tentacles oozed over the lockers, Angie smiled.

Brittany would discover who the school’s true terror was, today.
Written for the Friday Fictioneers:

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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19 Responses to The Terror

  1. LOL Loved this. I’m sure Brittany learned a lesson.


  2. Iain Kelly says:

    They never do make swimsuits to fit tentacles comfortably! 🙂

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  3. Dale says:

    Hey… some like big butts! And in her case, well, I’m sure there would be some who would appreciate what she has to offer… not Brittany, of course!


  4. Oh no! Brittany beware! Loved the surprising ending.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos


  5. Get on your bikes and ride!, with tentacles flailing in the breeze.

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  6. draliman says:

    See ya, Brittany, wouldn’t want to be ya!


  7. Nice one Angie! Revenge is sweet.


  8. Ooh, love it! That was a lot of fun. Thanks for sharing.
    Cheers, Ronda


  9. It’s YUGE! Make’s we wonder what terror lurks beneath Donald Trump’s orange hair.


  10. msjadeli says:

    Cackling with delight.


  11. Abhijit Ray says:

    Good! someone is putting Brittany in the place she belongs.


  12. Dear Eric,

    I’m in a different time zone today, so no coffee spewed. 😉 Go Angie. I like her already. Bye Bye Brittany. 😀



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  13. granonine says:

    Tentacles oozing, tentacles stuffed into her swimsuit–I want to see her FACE 🙂


  14. James McEwan says:

    I enjoyed this and was flashed back to “The Men in Black”. You just never know what’s under the skin.


  15. Loved the twist! Brittney is in for it now.


  16. Margaret says:

    Wow! That was unexpected. Great buildup though – the other girls knew there was something dangerous going on. Fantastic story.


  17. I wonder what planet she’s from. You just never know about your neighbors these days. Brittney just wouldn’t listen so now has to suffer the consequences. Angie probably isn’t in a good mood either after being squeezed into that swimsuit. I love this story, Eric. 😀 — Suzanne


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