This is an entry for Alastair’s Photo Fiction. The goal is to write a 150 word story based upon a photo prompt. No one is being held rigidly to the word count. It’s all about writing fun and a way to meet other writers. The link to the prompt is here. This time, one of Alastair’s photos is the source. My story begins below the photo.
Car of Youth
Maddie’s back arched severely as she hobbled with her cane. Harold held her arm to support her. His arthritic knees left him only slightly more steady than her.
“How much was the car?” Asked Maddie.
“One dollar.”
“Just one!” exclaimed Maddie. “How many previous owners?”
“Fifty or so, judging from the diary in the glove compartment.”
“Fifty? Why so many?”
“He didn’t say. He was a young guy in a hurry.”
With both creaking bodies finally in the car, Maddie said, “Just a short drive, Harold.”
Half an hour later, they arrived in Tulsa. Maddie’s hands stopped shaking. Harold’s knees no longer ached. Maddie wrote in the diary.
In Galveston, Maddie bought a bikini. They played in the surf until night and made love under the stars. They watched the sunrise in the morning. Golden light played across their taught skin and straight backs.
Maddie said, “It’s time to sell the car.”
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That is awesome. I would love to have a car like that. Thanks for taking part 🙂
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Thanks, dude. And thanks for creating the prompt. This is a lot of fun. I was having a major block until I arrived at your page. The sun started shining and my muse arrived.
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It just drove up 😉
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Yep. In an excellently preserved antique car.
By the way, is that a Jaguar in the photo?
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I’m not sure what it is. It some sort of figure leaning forward with it’s arms stretched behind.
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Hmm. I’m thinking it’s a Cadillac or a DeSoto:
http://justacarguy.blogspot.com/2010/08/hood-ornament-identifiaction-guide.html
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1936 Cadillac
Thanks for that 🙂
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A lovely read! I’m glad the inspiration for the prompt just drove up 😀
~Lyann
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Thank you! I love it when the muse drives up in a sexy car.
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How many have gone into the boot? …I’ll have to meander over and see. It is said that the thought is as bad as the deed.
This is a fun read. And enchanted car. Just be careful that Alastair’s Harold Weisz doesn’t meet up with your Caddy! …Do you remember the short lived ‘My Mother The Car” TV show. At least though, your car didn’t talk, and the price was,…well priceless.
Cheers, Jules
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Thanks, Jules. If Harold Weisz met the car, he’d be younger at least, hehe. I think I missed that series you mention, but I do remember Knight Rider. I could only take the talking car for so long. A car that just does it’s thing and that’s that is far better for me.
Cheers!
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This is brilliant. The written word (from the photo prompt) for your story, perfect. Thank you for sharing your talent with others! Penny
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Thanks so much for the kind thoughts. Comments are always appreciated. Hope to see you again soon!
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Mine had the couple going into the future – yours had a couple going into the past…This is some ride! 🙂
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Cool isn’t it? This amazing car spans across time. Ah, they just don’t make them like they used to!
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Cool story. We’ll have to buy this car when we’re 70 or so. 😉
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It’s a deal.
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This post reminded me of some of Ray Bradbury’s stories.
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Oh wow, you honor me with that comment. Ray Bradbury is one of my all-time favorite authors. You get major bonus points!
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He’s one of my favorites, too.
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