Car of Youth – Alastair’s Photo Fiction – April,21,2013

This is an entry for Alastair’s Photo Fiction. The goal is to write a 150 word story based upon a photo prompt. No one is being held rigidly to the word count. It’s all about writing fun and a way to meet other writers. The link to the prompt is here. This time, one of Alastair’s photos is the source. My story begins below the photo.

Car of Youth

Maddie’s back arched severely as she hobbled with her cane. Harold held her arm to support her. His arthritic knees left him only slightly more steady than her.

“How much was the car?” Asked Maddie.

“One dollar.”

“Just one!” exclaimed Maddie. “How many previous owners?”

“Fifty or so, judging from the diary in the glove compartment.”

“Fifty? Why so many?”

“He didn’t say. He was a young guy in a hurry.”

With both creaking bodies finally in the car, Maddie said, “Just a short drive, Harold.”

Half an hour later, they arrived in Tulsa. Maddie’s hands stopped shaking. Harold’s knees no longer ached. Maddie wrote in the diary.

In Galveston, Maddie bought a bikini. They played in the surf until night and made love under the stars. They watched the sunrise in the morning. Golden light played across their taught skin and straight backs.

Maddie said, “It’s time to sell the car.”

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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21 Responses to Car of Youth – Alastair’s Photo Fiction – April,21,2013

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  2. Alastair says:

    That is awesome. I would love to have a car like that. Thanks for taking part 🙂

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  3. LyannV says:

    A lovely read! I’m glad the inspiration for the prompt just drove up 😀
    ~Lyann

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  4. JulesPaige says:

    How many have gone into the boot? …I’ll have to meander over and see. It is said that the thought is as bad as the deed.

    This is a fun read. And enchanted car. Just be careful that Alastair’s Harold Weisz doesn’t meet up with your Caddy! …Do you remember the short lived ‘My Mother The Car” TV show. At least though, your car didn’t talk, and the price was,…well priceless.

    Cheers, Jules

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    • EagleAye says:

      Thanks, Jules. If Harold Weisz met the car, he’d be younger at least, hehe. I think I missed that series you mention, but I do remember Knight Rider. I could only take the talking car for so long. A car that just does it’s thing and that’s that is far better for me.

      Cheers!

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  5. Penny L Howe says:

    This is brilliant. The written word (from the photo prompt) for your story, perfect. Thank you for sharing your talent with others! Penny

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  6. RoSy says:

    Mine had the couple going into the future – yours had a couple going into the past…This is some ride! 🙂

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  7. Shey says:

    Cool story. We’ll have to buy this car when we’re 70 or so. 😉

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  8. List of X says:

    This post reminded me of some of Ray Bradbury’s stories.

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