The Refund – Shapeshifting 13 #16

The Refund

“It’s lovely here,” said Elizabeth as they strolled down the wooded path. “But this is no Faerie Kingdom!”

“What would convince you?” said Rachel.

“With tangible proof, I’ll refund your psychoanalyst fees.”

A unicorn passed them on the path. “Good morrow, Rachel!” it called.

Elizabeth stared blankly.

Rachel grinned. “About that refund…”
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This week at Grammar Ghoul Press’ Shapeshifting 13 writing challenge, we’re writing exactly 52 words based upon the photo above. This is my story. Look here to see what others wrote: http://www.grammarghoulpress.com/shapeshifting-13-16-kickoff/#more-2090

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About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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18 Responses to The Refund – Shapeshifting 13 #16

  1. joetwo says:

    It’s a trick! Someone stuck an ice cream cone to that horse’s head!!

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  2. List of X says:

    The unicorn owes Rachel money too, because he couldn’t believe psychoanalysts were real.

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  3. Lyn says:

    Deliciously delightful πŸ˜€

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  4. LRose says:

    Truly, made me smile!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Maverick Racheal. Liked the ventriloquist angle in your story. Cleverly incorporated.

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  6. Jen says:

    lol, too cute!

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  7. Pingback: Grammar Ghoul Press » Shapeshifting 13 Winners of #16 Challenge

  8. Beautiful use of the prompt picture. It looks so like a Faerie Kingdom. a Univorn would have done it for me too.

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  9. Susan says:

    very unique story. Strange but very sweet. Great job. πŸ™‚

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