First Contact
Racing down into the atmosphere, the unidentified object crashed, leaving behind one heck of a huge crater and a plume of smoke that could be seen from miles around. Hunter Green raced towards the site, nearly crashing his old Jeep. He had to get there before the government arrived and covered everything up. After years of stalking Area 51 with no sightings, this was his big chance.
He arrived at the crater and stood ready to greet the gentle alien visitors. At least he hoped they were gentle.
An alien machine emerged from the steaming pit. The spindly walker soon noticed him and a vicious-looking barrel pointed Hunter’s way. It fired, and something struck him in the chest. Hunter howled and screamed, imagining alien eggs laid in his body. As he squirmed, the soft foam ball beside him opened and something brown oozed out.
Aboard the machine, Tiquilatta glared at Piwaqqi. “You see? He hates it. It’s probably poisoning him.”
“I don’t understand.”
“Well, I do. As you can see, milk chocolate is NOT the universal peace offering!”
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Every Monday, It’s time to finish the story. This week stories must begin with, “Racing down into the atmosphere, the unidentified object crashed, leaving behind one heck of a huge crater and a plume of smoke that could be seen from miles around.” How’s that for an invitation to write a first contact story? The media prompt is the picture above. This post is my answer to the challenge. Look here for more stories based upon the prompts: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/01/12/mondays-finish-the-story-jan-12th-2015/
Brilliant ~ This made me laugh out loud ~ Interplanetary chocolate currency ~ π
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Hehe. Chocolate is the galactic-wide currency of exchange. We’re just now learning this. π Thanks so much, and thanks for the visit. π
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Ah, culture shock. Ambiguous peace offerings coupled with inept delivery systems. That’s actually for more likely to happen then peace talks.
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That’s what I think. We may not even recognize a peace offering when its delivered. We’ve definitely got to keep an open mind when encountering aliens. Thanks for stopping in! π
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LOL! I guess the aliens have a sweet tooth too! Great story Eric! I was not expecting the blast of chocolate! π Thank you for taking part in this week’s challenge! Stay tuned for the upcoming Mondays challenge! Be well! ^..^
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Hehe. Yes, chocolate is highly prized throughout the galaxy. More so than Gold or Platinum. π Glad you got laugh. Thanks so much, Barb. I’ll be here next time around. π
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Can you just imagine alien Moms running after the alien kids suffering from a sugar rush from that chocolate? Glad that you will be joining in again next week! π
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Oh yeah. How about an alien bombadier beetle child, having a little fit after too much chocolate, and hurling acid all over the grocery store. Major embarrassment!
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I hate that when that happens! Such a mess!
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Milk chocolate would work for me, though for preference I’d rather have it handed to me than be shot by it. Funny story!
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Yeah, me too. I think they really need to rework the delivery system. Glad you had fun, and thanks much! π
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Tiquitta and Piwaqqi? Seriously? You must have a special dictionary for unusual names.
DJ
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I do have a special dictionary. I keep one copy in a bottle of extremely strong beer, and the other in a bottle of rum. These names come out when I drink either one. The names come out when I drink either one. Rest assured, I do it purely for your entertainment. I get nothing from it… really. π
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So…the real names are Tequila and Pig’s Eye?
DJ
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Haha! π Yup. You’re all over it. π
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Oh I dunno, they turn up in my backyard with chocolate they’ll be most welcome.
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Same here. Aliens bearing chocolate have to be advanced and friendly, right? I think I’d even give them reserved parking. π
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I think that would be a most gracious move on your behalf. Anything that may put off potential death rays.
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The milk chocolate blast is hilarious and so is your choice of names. I loved your take on the story.
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Hehe. Glad you got a laugh. I was hoping to share a chuckle with this one. Thanks so much. I appreciate your thoughts. π
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A real fun take on this one. Great job.
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Thank you! I appreciate that. π
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Hilarious, Eric. π Aliens bearing chocolate in search of peace. They’re evidently very advanced.and should be welcomed with open arms. Well done. π — Suzanne
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That’s what I’m thinking. Even though peaceful, their delivery still needs some work. Subsequent efforts went a little better when they actually “handed” the chocolate out, rather than firing it. π Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks! π
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