Wanted Man
Diamond Jack had his hideout next to the Rattle Snake River. A small-time crook, his biggest score came when he stole $100 from a truck stop outside Provo, Utah. A week later, thousands of government men and helicopters descended on the area. Jack figured the government was VERY angry with him. He needed a hideout. Days later he found a deep hole made by this strange conical thing. Printing on it read, “Nuclear Warhead: 13 Megaton.” Being illiterate, Jack just ignored the strange words.
He hid there for five years before missing human contact too much. He ventured to town… and folks ran away screaming. It happened every time he visited anywhere. He must still be a big-time wanted man, he figured.
Seven years later, he decided to try again. He donned a suit & tie he’d stolen. He looked in the mirror.
His 23-inch tongue flicked and wiped his dragonfly’s eyes clean.
“Nope,” he grinned. “No criminal here. They’ll never recognize me!”
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Each week beginning on Monday, it’s time to finish the story. This week’s story must begin with, “Diamond Jack had his hideout next to the Rattle Snake River.” Another of Barbara Beacham’s terrific photos is the media prompt. This story is based upon the prompts. Look here for other stories based upon them: https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/2015/02/02/mondays-finish-the-story-february-2nd-2015/
Love it! There is something odd about this fellow. Maybe it’s the dragonfly eyes… 🙂 Thanks Eric for participating! See you next week? Be well… ^..^
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Yeah, something just slightly off. I wonder why folks are running away? 😉 Thanks Barb! I’ll see you next week. 🙂
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Looking forward to what you come up with next week…. 🙂
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nice twist, fun story.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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All that for $100.00. 🙂 Well done!
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I know. It’s amazing how much trouble you can get in to these days. 😉
Thanks so much! 🙂
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Haha–that’s one way to hide out!
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Yup. A good way to change your identity. No would could recognize you afterward. 😉
Thanks much for the visit! 🙂
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Only you… find a way to go Sci Fi!
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Haha! Scifi is running through my very blood. 😉 Thanks Ted!
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LOL! Sci Fi! Cute story.
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Hehe. Thanks! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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Funny story. I liked how you made it a sci-fi story from the nuclear waste. 🙂
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Hehe. Thank you! I do love Scifi, so I often lean that way. I’m happy to hear you had fun. It’s what I’m hoping for. 🙂
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It’s amazing what hiding in a little ol’ hole in the ground will do to a guy. You’re imagination is in fine fettle 😀
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Yep. Especially when there’s a radioactive nuclear warhead in there too. It changes a man. 😉 “Fine fettle.” I’ll have to remember that one. I like it. Thank you, Lyn! 🙂
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Damn! Wish I’d thought of that. I love scifi but just couldn’t think of a scifi twist for this one. Great story!
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Thank you Lisa! It’s good to hear there’s other scifi fans out there. Glad you liked it, and thanks! 🙂
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Excellent response to the prompt~ Your Diamond Jack is unique ~ A brilliant way to prove you are innocent ~ Change your appearance eyond recognition ~ Superb! 🙂
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BBBBBeyond~ This I-pad is headed for a radiated hole as well – 🙂
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Thank you much! I do like doing things different. So does Diamond Jack, apparently. Thanks so much for the kind words. It means a lot. 🙂
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This made me laugh. I love the 23 inch tongue licking his dragonfly eyes! Great story. 🙂
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Cool. I love to hear it when folks have a laugh. It’s what I hoped for. Thanks much for the visit! 🙂
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Leaky warheads have a way of changing a man. I love how he ignored the obvious and still reckoned people ran away because he’s (in his own mind) public enemy number one 🙂
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Yep. You diagnosed it perfectly. Brains were never his strong point, even before the leaking radiation. At least, after all that, he has no self-esteem issues. 😀
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I always love to read how you see these prompts. I am impressed once again. Fabulous story.
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Thank you kindly! I do aim to please. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Well, I think I’ll avoid all holes made by strange conical things in future! Mind you, i can appreciate how useful a 23 inch tongue and dragonfly’s eyes could be when answering the door to unwanted callers and suchlike. A really entertaining read. Well written!
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Yeah, me too, especially when the print says anything about “warhead.” The long tongue and dragonfly eyes could be really handy around Halloween, but must other times might be a hindrance in the usual social setting. 😉 I’m very happy to hear you were entertained. That’s what I like to hear. Thanks so much! 🙂
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Odd what a dose of radiation will do to you. It seems to be keeping him from being arrested. Well done, Eric. 🙂 — Suzanne
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True. Most people lose their hair, sicken and die. He’s not getting sick at all. With that tongue, I wonder if he’s eating flies a lot. 😉 Thanks so much, Suzanne!
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