Unpleasant Surprise – Gargleblaster Microstories #198

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“Who are you?” shouted Gerhard, turning on the lights.

“Sorry,” drawled Ben, clearly drunk. “Thought I was home.”

“This is MY house!”

“Yeah,” Ben sipped more whiskey. “Guess I can’t now.”

“Can’t what?” growled Gerhard.

“Compliment my wife on the awesome sex.”

About EagleAye

I like looking at the serious subjects in the news and seeking the lighter side of the issue. I love satire and spoofs. I see the ridiculous side of things all the time, and my goal is to share that light-hearted view.
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29 Responses to Unpleasant Surprise – Gargleblaster Microstories #198

  1. penshift says:

    That attitude… Like it was normal. 🙂

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  2. Oh Danny Boy says:

    Now that was funny.


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  3. Don’t you just hate it when that happens?


  4. Uh oh! I don’t think he wants to stick around much longer 😉

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  5. Silverleaf says:

    Can always count on you to make me laugh in a surprised and unexpected kind of way 🙂

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  6. Candace says:

    my immediate response: an out loud “oh, fuck” accompanied by laughter.

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    • EagleAye says:

      Haha! Yep. That’s the reaction I was expecting, because you know what followed involved a baseball bat, a call on a bloody phone, and paramedics. 😉 Glad you laughed, and thanks!


  7. inNateJames says:

    haha! Great answer and really well told!

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  8. Gina says:

    This tickled my funny bone!

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  9. This reminded me of the time our drunk neighbor from the top floor of the duplex stumbled into our kitchen . . . until the end. That ending was totally not what I expected.

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  10. YeshuM says:

    Oh that is just baaaaaaad! Great work!


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  12. jannatwrites says:

    Oh. My…. it’s funny, but it’s not 🙂


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